Nice idea. And I like how your lineart looks clean, even though your style might not be my cup of tea. It's not exactly realistic, but maybe it doesn't need to be.
I think you need to brush up your critiquing skills and read a few articles about how to give construction criticism if you do this regularly for Critoons. Telling me my non-realistic style "isn't exactly realistic" and "isn't your cup of tea" isn't helpful or constructive at all. Your stylistic preferences shouldn't be relevant in a critique.
NOW GIVE ME ATTENTION!!!!!1111
Doing all the shit that everyone else dose but with a vag.
I love your style. c: